tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8465660926148001262.post4910991769349189302..comments2023-05-28T17:26:26.008+02:00Comments on Garten literarischer Wirrungen / Garden of Literary Confusion: DittyIselfhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08601870100584844946noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8465660926148001262.post-40846766431239914292010-04-20T01:29:42.184+02:002010-04-20T01:29:42.184+02:00my nyc version:
redeeming snowy rooftops
upper eas...my nyc version:<br />redeeming snowy rooftops<br />upper east side manhattan<br />looking toward sunrise<br />12th floor blinking red for planes<br />and below the neighbor's hillocked roof garden<br />at night the jewelry of tiny glowing rectangles<br />infinite humans in that flying brick<br />the chirping of a small bird<br />a siren far then near then far<br />the rush of tires<br />a hornDeirdre LaPennanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8465660926148001262.post-54751419813688024002010-04-11T04:12:32.202+02:002010-04-11T04:12:32.202+02:00I don't know how you continue to do it at your...I don't know how you continue to do it at your age. Good constitution I suppose.Rallentandanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8465660926148001262.post-67886934302692393562010-04-11T01:40:27.549+02:002010-04-11T01:40:27.549+02:00I like the flow of this poemI like the flow of this poemJeremiah's Househttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14794851177961398653noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8465660926148001262.post-10156551114342511242010-04-10T22:00:29.608+02:002010-04-10T22:00:29.608+02:00grey city mornign are to be celebrated alsogrey city mornign are to be celebrated alsoWayne Pitchkohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15376196523487344143noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8465660926148001262.post-27370155273424173512010-04-10T19:20:12.837+02:002010-04-10T19:20:12.837+02:00Nice poem! Hope you feel better!
PamelaNice poem! Hope you feel better!<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.com