25.4.10

The first word to hear

It’s 7 a.m. on Sunday morning.
It’s the apartment and me.
The first word to hear is yet to come
from somewhere –
most likely through a telephone wire
or wireless or from someone
at a bakery.
But there’s bird song
through the open window,
and those birds
seem to be saying something.

– Iself (© 2010)

For napowrimo #25, first things first.

12 comments:

  1. Those birds always have something to say!
    Great post!

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  2. Very Poetic. Glad the birds were singing.
    Ist wohl der Fruehling Schuld :) Ingeborg writing from Autumn in Australia.

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  3. Ist wohl der Fruehling Schuld from me too. Enjoyed your poem. Dont speak German so I hope this is not rude.

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  4. Sorry not to comment in German...

    This poem is unfreakinbelievable.

    (The comment's American vernacular, but owes a debt to German for the creation of compund words.)

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  5. Guten morgen,
    appreciate that the narrator listed for not only humans but also the natural world. Viele danken for a nice poem.

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  6. I don't speak German either. But this is an excellent poem.
    Pamela

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  7. Good idea. It's always worthwhile to make sure the outside world is still rolling along.
    I did consider asking my cat to say something, but settled for waiting for my husband to wake up.

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  8. Nice to hear the birds singing. I hope they aren't stool pigeons. Wiping stool from pigeons is never a pleasant experience.

    This reminds me of a riddle. What did the worm say to the bird?

    Ans: Are you shitting me?

    Best,

    ~Mark

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  9. Lovely!

    http://thelaughinghousewife.wordpress.com

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  10. This is a fun poem. I enjoy the birds also.

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  11. this is good to hear the first sounds of spring... regardless of what or how we speak.. tho i did haf2 chuckle at marks joke... i gotta remember that one...conduit connect

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  12. I also enjoy hearing the birds...though not always at 6 a.m. when I want more sleep! Anyhow, very nice post.

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Readers and their comments are very welcome. Sorry I had to turn the obnoxious word verification on - too many spam attempts.