4.4.11

Time Waist

time waist time waist
time waist time waist
ime waist time wais
me waist time wai
e waist time wa
waist time
e waist time wa
me waist time wai
ime waist time wais
time waist time waist

 – Iself

A concrete poem for NaPoWriMo #4.

Not quite a 1-word poem (along the lines of Aram Saroyan's lighght, see NaPoWriMo blog), but the best I could come up with.
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3 comments:

  1. vivinfranceMon Apr 04, 02:29:00 PM GMT+2

    My waist reflects the time I have spent on this earth. Too little left to want to waste any! I like your hourglass poem.

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  2. Stan SkiMon Apr 04, 03:12:00 PM GMT+2

    Now that's what I call word art!

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  3. Andy SewinaTue Apr 05, 02:15:00 AM GMT+2

    Yeah, I like the shape of this!
    Have you thought of turning it upside down - and giving it a shake?

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