4.4.11

Time Waist

time waist time waist
time waist time waist
ime waist time wais
me waist time wai
e waist time wa
waist time
e waist time wa
me waist time wai
ime waist time wais
time waist time waist

 – Iself

A concrete poem for NaPoWriMo #4.

Not quite a 1-word poem (along the lines of Aram Saroyan's lighght, see NaPoWriMo blog), but the best I could come up with.

3 comments:

vivinfrance said...

My waist reflects the time I have spent on this earth. Too little left to want to waste any! I like your hourglass poem.

Stan Ski said...

Now that's what I call word art!

SweetTalkingGuy said...

Yeah, I like the shape of this!
Have you thought of turning it upside down - and giving it a shake?